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There was a girl,
A very strange and lonely girl,
She looked from here to there,
And everywhere,
Just to find someone like you.

She was so blind,
But heard the sound,
Of the cries around.

And then one day,
That magic day you came her way,
An answer to her prayers,
But never knew,
The pain in truth and lies.

I knew her too,
This girl, she spoke of you,
And told me of the world:

“There are many sights,
And many sounds,
Men like hounds,
Girls in gowns,
But this I tell you now:

The greatest one,
In all the world,
Is to see love,
And be loved in return.”
©2008-2009 ~crazy-Bunz
:iconcrazy-bunz:

Author's Comments

Put the music of 'Nature Boy' by Nat King Cole in the background, and you've got a song...kind of.

Yes, it is I, back from the dead. I miss everyone dearly, and I should really be doing my piano theory right now, but I felt like doing some writing. I was planning on making some sort of poetry complaining about how people whine for no reason, but this came out instead. Who knows why?

This is a poem about me, I suppose, because I don't write nearly as much about myself as I should. There's plenty to write about, I just don't want to be a narcissist, you know?

I wrote this poem for my best friends. I hope you know who you are, and I love you dearly, with all my heart. You are the answer to my prayers, and without you, I wouldn't be here.

Sorry for the sheer lame-ness of my writing. I've got this block...

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:iconmystic-nemisis:
really nice job, laura!
atcually the last stanza reminds me of the lines from Moulin Rouge
"the greatest thing youll ever learn
is to love and be loved in return"

--
Your desire to weaken my soul is my desire to strengthen it
:iconcrazy-bunz:
Well, that's because I based it off one of the songs that's in the movie. I prefer Nat King Cole's version to Bowie's though. I don't know why.

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As I always say, it takes a real special person to get lost in a bathroom.

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